After I did my blog post (on Thrusday, December 9, 2010), I understood that I made some mistakes, I understood that also by reading other people's comments on my post. Here are some of them:
- I need to include more pictures, like a picture of a spring scale.
- I need spacing between the paragraphs.
- I shouldn't use yellow as my color, since it's hard to read.
- I also should of explained what "SI" means.
- I should explain what the links are about. Plus, one of them did not work.
- I have one gremmatical mistake.
- I need to give the defenitions for the words we studied in class.
In my post for the third quarter, I will definitely put more pictures and will not use the color yellow! And I will also try a bit harder. But I still think that my post was colorful, I tried to use some scientific vocabulary and my post turned out very detailed. The benefit of doing a blog is to remind yourself of what happened in class today, one week ago or even a month ago. It is also, like moodle, helps you with your homework. And if you were sick you can read blog and see what happened during science class. I liked doing blogging, because there are many options for doing it - you can use pictures, different colors and things like that.
By TamarA
Nice work on your reflection post Tamara. Keep in mind you also needed to list what you did well on your Scribe Post. I do like that you included why you like blogging and how the blog is helpful. Good work overall :) ~Ms. D.
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